Monday, May 2, 2016

My poem

                    Narcissus


                        by


                  Nina Kallen


When Narcissus looks at the shallow pool,
What does he see?  His own winsome image?
Or passed, to past: Rivergod father, cruel,
Gurgling laughter rippling from his visage?


"Daddy's only joking!"  Cephissus forced
His son beneath the cold water, holding
Him down.  Narcissus broke away.  Air coursed
Through his lungs.  He gasped, crying, consoling


Himself that someday he could leave.  A man,
Or god, full-grown, follows his own path.  When
He says goodbye, he will be free.  He can
Live life on land, make his own choices, then.


Now he is grown, safe, dry, independent.
But at edge of water, land has ended. 

Morgan's poem


Allusion

She sits

on the bench

too close to him.

 

He turns to see

a girl,

reading a book.

Pretty hair.

Pretty face.

Generous figure.

 

She feels his eyes on her

and looks away.

After a moment

she finds the courage

to meet his gaze,

but he’s already faded away

staring into the empty space

before him.

 

She watches him watch nothing.

Skinny.

Dreaming eyes.
A nice smile.

 

He looks back at her.

Suddenly insecure again,

she turns back to her book, Fahrenheit 451.

How like a mirror, her face.

 Impossible; for how many people did you know

who refracted your own light to you?

Words tumble over words.

Nothing makes sense.

She pulls out her phone instead,

searching for simplicity,

and catches sight of her reflection in the screen.

 

Fat--

Three chins from this angle.

Blotchy pink cheeks.

 

He’d never want to be with someone

like her.

 

Nobody would.

 

He was so lucky

to be skinny

and good-looking.

 

He watches his marred reflection

in a puddle on the sidewalk.

skin and bones.

too pale,

even portrayed in water.

 

The girl next to him

is so lucky.

She’s got a figure and rosy cheeks.

 

Nobody would ever want him.

How could they?

 

They spend so long

criticizing their reflections

that they never bother to say hello

and ignore the open window

of a new friendship

and instead

hate

themselves.